Refines messaging content (continued)

package.json

@@ -14356,16 +14356,16 @@
 					},
 					{
 						"id": "gitlens.welcome.currentLineBlame",
-						"title": "See who made what changes at a glance",
-						"description": "Inline and status bar blame provide historical context about line changes.\nCodeLens adds contextual authorship information and links at the top of each file and at the beginning of each block of code.\nHovering over these blame annotations will reveal more details and links to explore.\n💡 Use the [Toggle Line Blame](command:workbench.action.quickOpen?%22>GitLens%3A%20Toggle%20Line%20Blame%22) and [Toggle Git CodeLens](command:workbench.action.quickOpen?%22>GitLens%3A%20Toggle%20Git%20CodeLens%22) commands from the Command Palette to turn the annotations on and off.",
+						"title": "See who made which changes at a glance",
+						"description": "**Inline blame** and status bar blame provide historical context about line changes.\n**Git CodeLens** adds contextual authorship information at the top of each file and at the beginning of each block of code.\n**Hover** over these blame annotations to reveal more details and actions.\n💡 Use the [Toggle Line Blame](command:workbench.action.quickOpen?%22>GitLens%3A%20Toggle%20Line%20Blame%22) and [Toggle Git CodeLens](command:workbench.action.quickOpen?%22>GitLens%3A%20Toggle%20Git%20CodeLens%22) commands from the Command Palette to turn the annotations on and off.",
 						"media": {
 							"markdown": "walkthroughs/welcome/3-current-line-blame.md"
 						}
 					},
 					{
 						"id": "gitlens.welcome.fileAnnotations",
-						"title": "See more context with file annotations",
-						"description": "Whole file annotations place visual indicators directly to the editor's scroll bar and in the gutter area, the space beside the line number, to help you gain more insights into your code.\n💡 On an active file, use the [Toggle File Blame](command:workbench.action.quickOpen?%22>GitLens%3A%20Toggle%20File%20Blame%22), [Toggle File Changes](command:workbench.action.quickOpen?%22>GitLens%3A%20Toggle%20File%20Changes%22), and [Toggle File Heatmap](command:workbench.action.quickOpen?%22>GitLens%3A%20Toggle%20File%20Heatmap%22) commands from the Command Palette to turn the annotations on and off.",
+						"title": "Get more context with file annotations",
+						"description": "Use on-demand whole file annotations to see authorship, recent changes, and a heatmap. Annotations are rendered as visual indicators directly in the editor.\n💡 On an active file, use the [Toggle File Blame](command:workbench.action.quickOpen?%22>GitLens%3A%20Toggle%20File%20Blame%22), [Toggle File Changes](command:workbench.action.quickOpen?%22>GitLens%3A%20Toggle%20File%20Changes%22), and [Toggle File Heatmap](command:workbench.action.quickOpen?%22>GitLens%3A%20Toggle%20File%20Heatmap%22) commands from the Command Palette to turn the annotations on and off.",
 						"media": {
 							"markdown": "walkthroughs/welcome/6-file-annotations.md"
 						}

src/webviews/apps/welcome/welcome.html

@@ -98,7 +98,7 @@
 
 				<h3>File Annotations</h3>
 				<p class="welcome__toolbar">
-					<span>On-demand whole file annotations to see authorship, recent changes, and a heatmap</span>
+					<span>Use on-demand whole file annotations to see authorship, recent changes, and a heatmap</span>
 					<gk-editor-toolbar-svg annotations annotations-toggled></gk-editor-toolbar-svg>
 				</p>
 				<gk-annotations-svg id="annotations" toggled></gk-annotations-svg>
@@ -121,7 +121,7 @@
 					>
 					✨
 				</h3>
-				<p>Helps you easily visualize your repository and keep track of all work in progress.</p>
+				<p>Easily visualize your repository and keep track of all work in progress.</p>
 				<p>
 					Use the rich commit search to find exactly what you're looking for. It's powerful filters allow you
 					to search by a specific commit, message, author, a changed file or files, or even a specific code
@@ -130,7 +130,7 @@
 				<gk-graph-svg></gk-graph-svg>
 
 				<h3>Side Bar Views</h3>
-				<p>Powerful views into Git that don't come with VS Code</p>
+				<p>Powerful views into Git that don't come in the box.</p>
 				<nav class="welcome__views-nav" aria-label="Sidebar view links">
 					<a
 						href="command:gitlens.showCommitsView"
@@ -253,7 +253,7 @@
 					☁️
 				</h3>
 				<p>
-					Workspaces allow you to easily group and manage multiple repositories together, accessible from
+					Leverage workspaces to easily group and manage multiple repositories together, accessible from
 					anywhere, streamlining your workflow. Create workspaces just for yourself or share (coming soon in
 					GitLens) them with your team for faster onboarding and better collaboration.
 				</p>
@@ -261,7 +261,7 @@
 				<gk-workspaces-svg></gk-workspaces-svg>
 
 				<p>
-					The Focus view brings all of your GitHub pull requests and issues into a unified actionable view to
+					Use the Focus view to bring all of your GitHub pull requests and issues into a unified actionable to
 					help to you more easily juggle work in progress, pending work, reviews, and more. Quickly see if
 					anything requires your attention while keeping you focused.
 				</p>
@@ -310,8 +310,8 @@
 
 				<h3><code-icon icon="beaker" size="20"></code-icon> GitKraken Labs</h3>
 				<p>
-					GitKraken Labs is our incubator for experimentation and exploration with the community to gather
-					early reactions and feedback. Below are some of our current experiments.
+					Our incubator for experimentation and exploration with the community to gather early reactions and
+					feedback. Below are some of our current experiments.
 				</p>
 				<p>
 					<strong>Explain Commit (AI)</strong>